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Sonnets - John N MacNeill

Over a year after setting the poem Bisearta to music, MacNeill wanted to return to song-writing, but could not find lyrics to suit his purposes.
So he tried to write a sonnet, and the result was the first of the poems listed below, some of which are intended to communicate directly enough to work as lyrics. After all, sonnet is from the Italian for little song.

A Place So Perfect
- about two people
- set to music here

I Never Should Have
Version Two
- about two people

Second on my List
Version of March 2019
- about meeting an old female acquaintance
- amended here to be about meeting a male
- set to music here

Trying Not To Wake Her
- a double sonnet, set early in the morning
- amended here as Trying Not To Wake Him

I never wanted cabbage
Version of May 2021
- about liking

You & Me
- a sonnet, but slightly extended
- about two young people

Remembering
- about a girlfriend of long ago
Second version

Diagnosis
- a sonnet in disguise
- a woman, a diagnosis …
- amended here to be about a man

The rhyme-scheme of a Shakespearian sonnet is ABAB-CDCD-EFEF-GG or ABBA-CDDC-EFFE-GG. To a large extent, the sonnets here also follow the pattern of three quatrains and a couplet, but with the less usual rhyme-scheme ABBA-BCCB-CDDC-DD. In some cases, instead of four rhyming lines there are two pairs of rhyming lines, those rhymes having assonance. Sometimes rhymes are mid-word; occasionally there are only half-rhymes instead of rhymes. Commonly a poem has a change of viewpoint, a refocusing, the point after which this begins being known as the turn. In a sonnet the turn is often after line eight or twelve; in these sonnets, not all turns & line-breaks happen where the rhyme-scheme might suggest.


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